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Life Neverending OCs

on Wed Jan 17, 2018 2:03 pm
Post your OCs here so they don't clutter the main thread. Here's the forms for you, and the rules once more just o be careful. Also two examples, my first ocs.

Rules:
No more than three ocs per person.
No more than two magics per oc.
Only humans and demigods can use magic, dragons, demons, and angels are restricted to their elements, curses, and blessing respectively, of which they can only have one.
Magic tools are allowed within reason.
Demigods Gift doesn't count towards the magic cap.
If a power is similar to anothers, discuss it with them if it is alright.
Don't cause any arguments, if you dislike something going on keep it between you.
Have fun!

OC forms:

Human
Full Name:
Age:
Gender:
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Description:  
Personality:
Appearance:
Bio:

Demigod
Full Name:
Age:
Gender:
Patron God:
Magic:
Gift of The Forge God:
Description:  
Personality:
Appearance:
Bio:

Demon:
Full Name:
Age:
Curse:
Description:  
Personality:
Appearance:
Bio:

Angel:
Full Name:
Age:
Gender:
Patron God:
Blessing:
Description:  
Personality:
Appearance:
Bio:

Dragon
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Element:
Personality:
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Human
Full Name: Adrien Shinhild
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Magic: Vector
Description:  The user is able to manipulate the vectors of anything, physical or incorporeal, within five feet of them, redirecting and redistributing energy with impunity, so long as they are able to match the energy that comes into the field. The uses stretch as far as the mind can think, from simply redirecting arrows and sword blades to bending light around them to become invisible to redirecting the heat from a droplet of water, boiling another while freezing the original. Once cast, the field stays in one area for a limited time, before the user can recall and then redirect it to another. The user cannot change the vectors of themselves.
Personality: Adrien is rather absent minded, often getting caught up on little details instead of the major project. He never holds a grudge, and would rather forgive than cause strife. He is rather proud of his magic, seeing it as an impenetrable shield for himself. He isn't proud or sure of himself, however, often coming off as dull or shy due to constantly remaining quiet, simply so he doesn't say aloud his own criticism. Easily impressed by others, he finds enjoyment in most things as long as there's someone else to do it with.
Appearance: (TBA)
Bio: Adrien was born into a farming family, being raised to till fields and plant wheat and corn for the year. He worked tirelessly day after day, proud to be working with his family. When his magic became apparent, he wiped it off as a fluke. However, men from the Court of Magi came one day and took him from the farm, forcing him into a training program against his will. Making the best of his situation, he made friends with many of the other initiates and even his captors at times, though these never lasted long as guards were rotated every week. Showing himself to be a prodigy with his abilities, Adrien was soon to be recruited into the army, but before this could happen, in self defense, he killed a drunken guard. Sentenced to hang until he was dead, the Court Magistrate watched on as he hung for hours without loss of life, struggling the whole time. Calling it a gift from the gods, he was cut down and set free, banished from the kingdom. Now a wandering merchant, he works guarding a caravan from bandits and thieves.

Demigod
Full Name: Irina Truesdale
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Patron God: Erebus, God of Chaos
Magic: Lighthanded Shadow
Description: The user has a sentient, fully autonomous shadow, which is separate from their own body. This shadow has the ability to grab hold of anothers shadow, and steal their magic, curse, or blessing, and give it back to the caster. The powers can be gathered infinitely, though they are watered down the more the user gathers at once, and will never match the originals' power, no matter how much practice is put in. Skill with said abilities also is not transferred, the caster starts off as a novice with mere access to the power. The original user has no change to their powers, they are merely copied back. The closer the shadow is to the caster, the stronger their stolen abilities, but if the shadow is stricken with intense light it will become panicked and drop the stolen magics. The shadow is also fully corporeal, able to grab hold of people and objects as if it were really the caster, though it can be harmed in doing so, which would have a similar effect to being cast upon with light.
Gift of The Forge God: Infinite Sword Belt
Description: The Infinite Sword Belt is a plain leather and iron belt, with a tiny scabbard on it, a plain and simple wooden and ivory handle extending out. However, when drawn, the wielder can bring forth whatever object they wish from the belt, be it a sword or an axe or even food and water. The object is always impaled on the stump of a blade, which must be replaced in the scabbard to be used again.
Personality: Irina is rather timid, preferring to let her shadow do all the work for her. She enjoys napping or swimming most of the time, and is often found wandering riverbanks and visiting fisheries to help out. She is rather bitter to those that betray her, especially her father, the God of Chaos, blaming him for her mothers death at her birth, and seeks to supplant him eventually. Usually rather calm when confronted, she holds utmost trust in her shadow to see them through any problem. When she is forced to, Irina can be brave, though this usually results in her becoming more scared after.
Appearance:
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Bio: Irina's mother was a dyer Emilia, who lived during a time when the sky split in two and the gods fell to earth, made mortal. The God of Chaos was behind this, merely a prank gone wrong that ended with much of the pantheon dying over the course of the incident. Erebus fell in love with her mother, and came back as often as he could, though his powers forced him to constantly move around the world. One day, when the gods had reascended, she let Erebus know she was with child, but was very ill. Unable to help, he begged Life to save his wife and child, though she refused to interfere with life that was yet to be. Pleading out, he called for any of the gods aid who would, and when Anisad, the Goddess of Wealth, stepped forward, he used blades stolen from Mars Ultar, the late God of War, to cut down Anaya. Tricking the gods into bringing  Emilia to their realm, covered in the skin of Anisad, he presented the child as their own, before Emilia died from the strain and sickness. The child was granted the life of a Demigod to save them and their sickly life, though their mother was beyond help. Life gave her her own mothers soul, and Erebus granted her a piece of his own shadow, usually all ever seen of the trickster. Now lost on the Earth, orphaned by a poor woman and a god, Irina grew up as a medicine womans' apprentice in a small village. Regretfully, she answered her fathers call to action and left her home to seek out Death, though she felt it was not the job of mortals to bring such a being about.


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Re: Life Neverending OCs

on Thu Jan 18, 2018 3:12 pm
(Yoooo sounds rad, it'd be fun to get something fresh going! I got a quick question though. Regarding the gods involved, I noticed on your OC it's a greek god, when creating demigods should we stick to pre-exisitng gods?)
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Re: Life Neverending OCs

on Thu Jan 18, 2018 11:53 pm
(That'd probably make things easier to go by, but you are allowed to make gods fully new if necessary.)
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Re: Life Neverending OCs

on Fri Jan 19, 2018 2:55 pm
(Rad thanks!)
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Re: Life Neverending OCs

on Tue Jan 23, 2018 1:08 am
(Me third oc)

Dragon
Name: Ledenaia
Age: 116
Gender: Male
Element: Air
Personality: Ledenaia is quick to judge, often springing to conclusions and ignoring the council of others if he has already come to a conclusion. His will is nearly unshakable, not even Elder Dragons able to dissuade him from action. The only person he reliably listens to is his mother, and the Elder Dragon of his roost, Alatris. He prides himself on his flight, being able to stay in the air for weeks at a time, even crossing seas without rest, or even able to fly to the tip of the atmosphere. Believing nothing to be the equal of a dragon, he thinks the lesser races should be subservient, or, in the case of humans, a food source. When on the ground, he experiences severe paranoia, the only place he's willing to sleep is on the back of his mother.
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Bio: Young by draconic standards, Ledenaia is pampered by his mother Alatris, who cut down his father Fataleon for eating their young during a plague-induced famine, Ledenaia being the only survivor. Suppressing the memory as a falsehood of being taken down by a Purgatory Wolf, Ledenaia rarely has set foot on ground since that day. When he asked his mother where Fataleon had gone, Alatris lied to him, telling him a neighbouring roost slew him in combat. Sneaking into the hatchery in the dead of night, dozens of eggs were shattered, and hatchlings lay limp on the floor beneath his talons. When Alatris learned they had her son, she personally took wing, blowing down and splintering their Mother Tree in search of her young. Convincing her he had been captured and fought his way out, with the enemy attempting to feed him to the young, the mother and son together slew the entire roost, even their Elder Dragon. Ever since that day, most dragons revered him as a hero, bravely staring down enemies ten times his age and coming out alive. Becoming the leader for hunting excursions, he still clings to his mother like a hatchling, despite his position as a hunter and leader.
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Re: Life Neverending OCs

on Sat Jan 27, 2018 8:06 pm
Human
Full Name: Melitta Costas
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Magic: Fauna's Will
Description: Melitta opens a mental connection with a creature, it's a two way street that allows elitta to do minor reconassance. However the more intelligent the creature, the more effort it takes, the more effort it takes the less aware of her surroundings.
Magic: Pan's Pipes
Description: Utilizing the set of pan pipes she's weilded since her youth, Melitta can entrance creatures and have them do her bidding or lull them into complacency or into a fit of rage. Just as her communication it takes more energy the more intelligent the creature is. Willing a human into this is possible with her ability but not possible at her current level of skill.
Personality: A shy disposition and general wariness of strangers due to her isolated upbringing, Melitta often pushes herself out of her comfort zone to follow the teachings of generosity and helpfulness that her parents raised her with. She's kind but emotionally closed off and seems to operate at her own tempo in conversation.
Appearance: (I'll get around to it)
Bio: A peasant girl from the rural outskirts of a heavily walled town. Melitta is an only child, thus when her magic began to develop her parents promptly kept it a secret to keep her with them. Due to the rather lowkey nature of her magic it wasn't diffucult, but it still required great vigilance on the part of Melitta and her parents. Her parents were not wealthy, owning a very small farm and bee hives. Melitta spent her childhood speaking with the bees on the farm. In an attempt to live her own life Melitta now works at inn in her village as a barkeep.
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Re: Life Neverending OCs

on Sun Jan 28, 2018 6:57 pm
Heyo I hope this is ok errent
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Full Name: Elaine Harriet
Age: 22
Gender: female
Magic: Earth's gift
Description:
Using there ability they try to form what they need in there mind . From armor to swords if it is made from the earth they can use it . They happen to be able to create small earthquakes and shields within a few feet from themselves . If a person is over 20 feet away the items will crumble . In fights they are better close range . They often have to stop midway because of there weak body .
Magic: wings of claire
Description: they discovered this as a child from being pushed off of a roof they gained a small friend . It was a familiar called Claire. They can fuse into Elaine giving Elaine temporary wings to save them from high places or ultimate danger makeing her run away. Even if Elaine insists she is ok it will t a key her out of the fight
Personality:
Elaine acts calm lady seeming ready for just about anything , yet she is the complete opposite. She often ends up underestimating battles and being pulled out of them . She acts like she has everything together while being a internal mess worried about every little thing . The reason why she seems to have everything all together is to not make people worry . She is terrified of worrying people and causing more harm . She always assures she is ok even when she is not . Every once in awhile she breaks down crying . She insists it's ok . She is a absolute wreck when it comes to danger . She has no sense of it , which is why she is pulled out of danger by her familiar.
Appearance: ( TBC)
Bio:
Elaine's parents were a more aristocratic family . Finding out there young daughter who was almost assassinated had magic after she was pushed off a building they began to worry . What if others wanted to use there daughters powers . Would she kill them by accident or herself . She was weak from the start bodywise. Would this kill her ? No her parents sent her to train she would learn how to control her powers . During the time of learning how to control her powers and her familiar she discovered she wasn't blessed with one but two magic powers . She was able to create stuff using the earth , it was a few months before she began to leave home . She had a fever and a earthquake wouldn't stop until the fever went down . After this she was bedridden for days . She eventually got over her sickness . She began to feel like her family was smothering her . This was around the age of 19 . She ran away . She left a note saying " mother, father I am sorry but I now need to venture out into the world . I will never grow with you smothering me therefore I'm going onwards to my own journey goodbye may we meet again". During the next three years she learned how to swordfight and kept her own up . She did have a moment when she was about to die but claire got her to the medic in time . Now she was on her way to a new city.
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Re: Life Neverending OCs

on Sun Jan 28, 2018 7:47 pm
(Aye it's approved.)
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Demigod
Full Name: Shadow
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Patron God: Tsukiyomi-no-mikoto or Tsukiyomi the God of the Moon
Magic: He is very skilled at a magic where he is the master of Black Magic and many more dark magic as he was known as a Sage or Warlock since his is the master of Arcane knowledge but he is a very skilled assassin but magic is his best skill. But for magic from his dad Tsukiyomi he gains magic that allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle, preferably in offense. The properties of this holy magic rely primarily on astronomical objects like meteors or the generation and manipulation of the energy of stars from their own body which causes much stress to the user if not used correctly as it could rip the person apart and also utterly destroy their nerves. The caster if trained hard enough can create powerful light blasts or beams of high destructive power a reminiscent of starlight, at their opponents such as a moon or a falling star as an example but like before it is a very destructive magic that needs proper concentration or else it would utterly destroy the nerves in one’s body. This light is not the only substance used, however the caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent for destructive usage; the strength can be comparable to the effects caused by a black hole but could backfire as it could eradicate the user if not used properly or even concentrated right. The use of such Magic can be used to enhance the caster's own skills drastically for various purposes, such as shrouding them in Magic that can increase their speed significantly. Oddly and interestingly Shadow is quite bad at the magic from his God heritage as he wasn’t able to master it properly since he never really knew how to work the magic as he also never knew anything about his Godly heritage at all when he was young as he only knew very late as he instead uses his black magic from his mother’s side of the family that he feels more comfortable to use.
Gift of The Forge God: Sword of Totsuka or was rather known properly as Totsuka-no-Tsurugi.
Description: It is a black flames blade given by his dad Tsukiyomi for his son as the sword is an ethereal weapon with an enchanted blade capable of sealing the target it pierces. Those who are stabbed by the sword are drawn into the jar and trapped in a illusion-like "world of drunken dreams" for all eternity but can be broken out if one has a very powerful willpower. It is also known to possess black flames that was taken piece of by the Goddess of the Sun Amaterasu his father’s sister to burn its opponents but the issue is that Shadow is unable to control the black flames which would burn and tear his arms apart by the black flames making him only using it as a normal sword which is powered by fire rather than using it to its full advantage and has a fear of using this ability. Shadow only uses a fraction of the sword's power but even so it would still not be as powerful as the legends say it would be since Shadow is a demigod as it would weaken the weapon and could only be truly used by a deity.
Personality: Shadow's personality is extremely antisocial. He is calm, tactical and understandable towards pain and darkness. But he is extremely antisocial. He talks to others only when it would be beneficial or he absolutely must. Though not exactly shy, he is withdrawn, and dislikes a lot of attention, especially from women and girls since he would feel awkward with them and unsure what to say since he would be comfortable in his assassin mode and alone. He talks to others only when it would be beneficial or he absolutely must. He is also extremely reluctant to trust others, Shadow is also is the calm, self-possessed one. When he has to fight, he's a tough opponent to beat. He is also known for being mysterious. He's not the type to start an outburst. He can, however, be condescending, and isn't partial to helping others unless something is in it for him. He also has a soft spot for cat stuff.
Appearance: Shadow is a young looking man whose most prominent features are his waist length black ebony hair, a red tattoo above and under his right eye and his crimson eyes which he has had since his childhood. Once worked in the assassin guild he wore a black magic-proof trench coat with the bottom of it being in tatters due to many battles known, black shinobi pants, a black shirt, black leather gauntlets that has Japanese red runes on it, white pierrot-inspired mask that has a Shinigami marked on it that fully conceals his face, he wears a grey cape with red trims on it around his waist with addition, and two strings with shield-shaped pendants hanging down from the hood that is connected to the dark blue cloak around him which has golden lines on it and he wears a red pendent around his neck that was from his black mage mother.  
Bio: Shadow was unusual child that was isolated and hated by his peers as he is the child of the God of the Moon that was left in the moon by his own people while the wife is a black mage only referred to Sheik the Black Mage as thanks to this Shadow had an unfortunate life where he is mostly even doesn’t know about his bloodline as he is only told by adopted assassin masters of what he is a young boy from Wutai (A Japanese setting land) that has amazing abilities and soon he was trained to be a weapon as he became the Black Reaper (Kuro no Shinigami in Japanese) but left after many years due to him using his black magic to utterly destroy the assassin group. Shadow wondered around and taking jobs as an assassin mercenary with powers of black magic as he became more and more famous of his skills as such he became a major threat and a very dangerous assassin striking fear and despair to the people’s hearts when in the dark...as they have given him a inhuman reputation as a Shinigami but there is more as every time he is near a Shinto Shrine he can hear his dad's voice almost like he belongs there...But after years of walking the human world he heard about a new Death and wants to help the world after knowing a bit about his godhood.

Human
Full Name: Ren Ling Xiao-Long  
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Magic: Aura
Description: Ren is a very skilled martial artist where he is presumed by rumours to be unstoppable and he managed to defeat tough opponents as well as drawing with a high level master combatant in a fight with just fist to fist. But most of all is his aura skills where he uses his spirit as a fighting force to defeat higher-level opponents but also at a cost of his own well being. He is also a master weapon user that is almost by some people’s view points considered unbeatable and his main weapon is a Chinese Spear called Qiang or also called Kwan Dao. Another few things about Aura is that it has the ability to read minds though only in a limited focus and only on the surface of thoughts nothing too deep, it is able to "sense" other Auras and view surroundings even with a blindfold and also allows users to view through some objects, projection of one's Aura; such as to create barriers or attacks. It can also be used to transfer Aura to others, a method that can be fatal to the user. As when the aura builds up it can unleash a powerful blast called Aura Sphere where it can be considered a spiritual blast of destruction to others but it is very taxing on one’s soul and Ren could only do it once a day.
Personality: Ren is a calm and spiritualist person. Ren is usually mellow and wishes for peace and quiet. He seems very much in control of himself, as shown by his calm and deliberate response to the appearance of a King Taijitu. He is unbothered by people's bubbly and contrasting personality, showing a great deal of patience when dealing with his hyperactive, happy-go-lucky people. Ren is also shown to be quite studious, as he is nonstop reading in a library to expand his knowledge of the world. Likewise, he is well informed about villages in between kingdoms, from the knowledge he gained from his experience as an Aura Guardian. However, this is not to say that he is completely humourless. He is quite playful after finding a panda and playing hide and seek with it in the Emerald Forest. Ren is also indicated to be a bit of a cook, as he makes food and meals for himself since he never really seems to be known for staying in homes or hotels and rather stay outdoors. Ren is also known to meditate on stuff as he prefers it to sleep as he would feel more comfortable with it rather than wasting it on sleep.
Appearance: Ren has long ebony black hair to his waist which is tied in a pony tail, pale skin, golden dragon eyes and he wears a Kung-Fu type of clothes as both the pants which get tighter below the knees and the vest are black and both have a triangular pattern with a yellow lining, and the pants are tied with a white silk belt, tasseled ropes over the hips, and calf-high open-toed sandals. From his middle finger to his biceps run gradient golden-to-black detached sleeves ending in metal armbands. On the back the vest also has a Tao symbol to show his dedication to the Daoism and understanding the benefits it can give.  
Bio: Ren is a martial artist from the country known as Wuxia as he follows the teaching of Daoism. After many years of teaching of the fist as he mastered many skills along the way and understanding his own chi and became an Aura Guardian after passing a trail by his people. Where he uses his own spirit, mind and body for developing his skills more by focusing on his aura training. As he continued to grow his power increased where he fought many forces of darkness in his fights for justice in Wuxia but was taken into battlefield to fight against Watui where the war was long and bloody as Ren met and Shadow in a very brutal fight but in Ren’s healing the war has ended. Ren decided to train more as he decided to go West where he entered a world very different than he saw in Wutai and Wuxi. Ren saw within the world more death and destruction by people, Gods not caring about the loss of Death and much more as Ren showed confusion of what is going on within the world and so after seeing so many crusades by all of these forces which angered Ren’s justice scale as he charged in battle to help those in need and find the new Death to restore balance to the world.

Angel:
Full Name: Lilith Yuuki Stenburg
Age: Unknown but looks like 18
Gender: Male
Patron God: Helios, God of Sun
Blessing: Holy Fire
Description: Unlike most fire this is a rare white flames that were given to Lilith as a gift as he uses white holy flames called Hakatusuni. It is a sacred white flames from Heaven that only a rare few have it and can summon a fiery white flame spirit named Horusai which grows stronger every time it consumes a soul and feeds of the hope of those around it to power it.
Personality: Lilith is a shy and nervous angel who frequently gets into trouble due to her blunding and shy nature. He seems to be quite cheerful as he's smiling and happy most of the time as he constantly giggles whenever he is around people he is safe to be with. Lilith is quite playful and to a certain degree, childish. He even teases a lot of males of his true gender since he utterly looks like a girl due to his appearance he is constantly getting confused with the wrong gender before it was a pain now it is mostly funny humour he likes to tease others. Though underneath much of these teasing and humour can be a very serious person as he has a very dark morbid side to his enemies the demons where he uses his holy flames to burn them alive till they are reduced as black ashes as his family was attacked and he was left traumatised after what they did to him after many years since captured. As Lilith keeps this side on lock as mostly is his goofy and sweet side often showing to people.
Appearance: Lilith has very long, wavy, pastel white-silver hair that reaches down to his feet with a small ahoge; large blue eyes with no pupils with purple eye shadow, large delicate eyelashes; peachy skin, cherry lips, light blush on the cheeks and a very feminine appearance that confuses most males and even females on that they thought Lilith is a female even if they scan him and try his scent as such it very much often would come up as him being female utterly confusing even more people around him making him almost a girl but not really thanks to his weird aura and appearance. Lilith wears a frilly, light pink layered robe with a red ribbon tied in a bow around his neck. Around the chest are three emerald patterns with two golden triangles above. He wears wing-like adornments around her ears and small hoop earrings. But in a party once with the angels in their sanction he wore a revealing, thin red dress that has splits showing his upper thighs right to the waist as the dress has a midriff right up to her chest as it shows more of his body, wears red-pink lipgloss, purple eyeshadow like before which is emulating more of his feminine features.
Bio: Lilith is an Angel that was born in a high class of Angels as such he was considered as a noble of high class. But since he was born he was almost considered a female but was actually a boy as this confused many of the Angels but they began treating him as a girl. The Angels later gave him gifts like a normal female angel even sending him to where female angels go to learn more about themselves. But since the attack by the demons who slaughtered his family and was kidnapped for many years by the demons. Lilith was soon rescued by Helios who he gifted the holy white fire to slay the demons and showed his dark and cruel side where he brutally slaughtered the demons and went on a rampage destroying many demons in his path as blood was splattered around him as his clothes are nearly gone as they are tattered from the struggle as by this he was nicknamed “The Angel of Death”. Lilith was soon taken in by the other angels where they helped him recover from the horror of what happened. After some years of healing Lilith began to wonder about the mortal world and fear for it as he left to it to try and find a way to save it.

(Thank you for the reply! It helped a lot! I hope this fixing works...)

(I was going to do demon but I decided to do angel and I never did that type of character for the angel so this is my first time using that type of character!)


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Re: Life Neverending OCs

on Thu Feb 01, 2018 8:31 pm
(Silver, first things first:

Your Demigod - His entire character goes against the plot. His patron god can't exist because there is already a pre-existing God of Death and God of Creation. God of Creation is off limits and so is Death because of plot. Death had no kids. That's the point of finding a new one.

Your Human - Tone his powers down, good lord man. No one should really be able to beat a demon with only their bare hands. Make it so he has to use his magic. Side note, "beat satan within an inch of his life" Can't be a thing. Besides that, accepted. Also, word of warning, no one is "Unstoppable"

Your Angel - This is actually fine. Good job! Accepted
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Re: Life Neverending OCs

on Fri Feb 02, 2018 11:28 am
Alright thank you I was thinking about these characters were too much
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Human:

Full Name: Dearil Siriso

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Magic: Nullification Magic

Description: Nullification is a form of magic that is capable of nullifying other forms of magic. The magic comes in the form of black substance that comes off from him, and only from him. The magic will always expand off him, and can only reach a couple meters from him. The Nullification complete dispels non-physical magic and stops control of physical matter.

Personality: A kind-hearted and simple lad from a fishing village. Dearil is of humble beginnings, and is quite humble as a result. Despite this, deep down...he craves the chance to prove he's capable of doing great things. Dearil, having been raised through village life, is very skilled in survival skills although he is atrocious at farming, he excels at hunting/fishing. Thanks to his grandfather, Dearil has a good sense of justice and morals. Although he wants to be a brave and courageous person there is a tad sheepish and shy, not use to combat and raised in peace, not too mention he not use to social interaction with strangers.

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Bio: Born in a small fishing village, Dearil lived a simple life with his parents and grandfather. He helped tend to the farm his village had, however he was a pretty bad at tending to plants, so most of his time was spent fishing. Another large portion of his childhood was spent with his grandfather, a former knight in his younger years. Dearil was greatly fascinated by his grandfather's stories of battle, and spent a lot of time learning from him the values of a knight. Dearil, much to his parents dismay, took up swordsmanship that his grandfather taught Him despite his parents not seeing the need for a fisherman to learn military swordsmanship. When Dearil wanted to learn magic, his parents drew a line...to which his grandfather compromised by teacher Dearil a purely defensive form of magic "For his own protection"

Tragedy struck when a mysterious illness took his parents lives, said illness soon began spreading through the village. At this time, the God of Death had passed...leaving his village greatly damaged. Many friends and others were left suffering due to the illness, meant to kill but could not. One day, his own grandfather was struck by the illness, he told Dearil that this was most likely caused by a passing of a god, telling him that a successor needs to be found. Dearil canw up with an idea and vow, taking his grandfather's sword and gearing up for travel, his village was suffering and the world needed a new God of Death, then he would find them himself.
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